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So I finally joined the kakairu community here on LJ, and I felt… 
9th-Aug-2006 08:51 pm
So I finally joined the kakairu community here on LJ, and I felt inspired to write a short piece. However, since it doesn't revolve around KakaIru, I thought I'd post it here instead. This is my first attempt at a Naruto fanfic, so I apologize if it's crap.
The story focuses on the woman left behind when Hayate is killed by the sand. I just recently reread the manga, and did you guys notice the female ANBU member who visited the memorial shortly after he died, and on the day of the Sandaime's funeral? I didn't, when I first read it, but when I noticed it, I was touched. The fics I've read about Hayate mainly link him to other male Jounin, so this is my take.
Please review! I'd really appreciate feedback! ^_^

Title: She watched, and she loved.
Author: mad_banana
Pairing: Haya x ?
Rating: G
Genre: Tragedy
Words: 475
Summary: From the view of the woman he left behind.
Source: mad_banana
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10th-Aug-2006 04:53 am (UTC)
Aha, she DOES have a name! Thanks much!
10th-Aug-2006 04:50 am (UTC)
did you guys notice the female ANBU member who visited the memorial shortly after he died

Yes, her name is Uzuki Yuugao :) Technically she is his canonical girlfriend -- though we're only told this information in the Naruto databooks, never in the anime/manga.

(Sorry for the repeat posts, I kept messing up the link x_X)
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